09-01-2014, 05:22 PM
Thank you for your replies. I will make a edited version today from the feedback and post it later. With regards to people asking about the box, well there is no right answer as I like all my poems to be open to interpretation. However the ending of the box to me, signifies that the person will be set free when they enter their next box. Often ( and I know it depends on where you are from) a box can be a name for a coffin.