08-30-2014, 06:35 AM
My friend thinks that tick-tacks friend is rather funny or maybe it's the other way around. 
...but seriously, the poem needs a central metaphor to build that ass or stomach around, as well as a better effort in depicting the body part.

...but seriously, the poem needs a central metaphor to build that ass or stomach around, as well as a better effort in depicting the body part.
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris

