08-28-2014, 12:28 PM
(08-28-2014, 11:46 AM)danny_ Wrote: i'm like fogglethorpe, preferring direct language. you did that, and that's why i didn't want to stop reading. and it carried all the way through. and any picking about with it is just minor stuff. i didn't understand the title, and i'd say people in general wouldn't either. i liked the frozen wedding cake at the end, good ending!thanks danny, i appreciate that. and the title references Lewis Carroll's Alice's Adventures in Wonderland, which also accounts for some of the imagery in the poem.