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down the rabbit hole
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08-28-2014, 11:46 AM
i'm like fogglethorpe, preferring direct language. you did that, and that's why i didn't want to stop reading. and it carried all the way through. and any picking about with it is just minor stuff. i didn't understand the title, and i'd say people in general wouldn't either. i liked the frozen wedding cake at the end, good ending!
"The best way out is always through."-Robert Frost
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down the rabbit hole - by cjchaffin - 08-23-2014, 03:32 PM
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RE: down the rabbit hole - by cjchaffin - 08-24-2014, 02:34 PM
RE: down the rabbit hole - by bena - 08-24-2014, 11:54 PM
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RE: down the rabbit hole - by bob68 - 08-26-2014, 04:39 AM
RE: down the rabbit hole - by makeshift - 08-26-2014, 01:47 AM
RE: down the rabbit hole - by cjchaffin - 08-27-2014, 12:09 AM
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RE: down the rabbit hole - by bena - 08-27-2014, 04:41 PM
RE: down the rabbit hole - by cjchaffin - 08-28-2014, 01:47 AM
RE: down the rabbit hole - by danny_ - 08-28-2014, 11:46 AM
RE: down the rabbit hole - by cjchaffin - 08-28-2014, 12:28 PM
RE: down the rabbit hole - by billy - 09-09-2014, 05:53 PM
RE: down the rabbit hole - by zahrakh - 09-09-2014, 11:21 PM
RE: down the rabbit hole - by cjchaffin - 09-10-2014, 12:34 AM
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