08-28-2014, 11:46 AM 
	
	
	
		i'm like fogglethorpe, preferring direct language. you did that, and that's why i didn't want to stop reading. and it carried all the way through. and any picking about with it is just minor stuff. i didn't understand the title, and i'd say people in general wouldn't either. i liked the frozen wedding cake at the end, good ending!
	
	
	
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