Playing with Jung

[cjchaffin]

thanks billy.

so the line you're referring to would read as such:

He dances, flinging yellow petals


is that what you're suggesting? because the grass is implied from the garden reference and therefore the green color as well?

removing the on before grass would be:

He dances the grass, flinging yellow petals


which doesn't read right, or am i just being completely dense here
and missing something? apologies if i am, my brain stopped functioning
correctly about an hour ago...

anywho, thanks for the confirmation about the color addition leanne suggested.

sorry... colour