Aging Aubade (edit 1, billy)
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(08-22-2014, 11:39 PM)billy Wrote:  god i feel old Big Grin great effort ella. i got stuck a little with conveniently though the half rhyme (almost) does work well in the couplet.
You're right on conveniently, I don't know what I did when I put it together, but that line's screwed now. I'll look through the scraps of paper I pulled out of my bag and fix it. And I often screw the couplet, I think of that first then tend to just let it be,

Thanks for the read. Life would suck without the laughter. Big Grin
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Aging Aubade (edit 1, billy) - by ellajam - 08-22-2014, 10:22 PM
RE: Aging Aubade - by billy - 08-22-2014, 11:39 PM
RE: Aging Aubade - by ellajam - 08-22-2014, 11:50 PM
RE: Aging Aubade ( edit 1, billy) - by ellajam - 08-23-2014, 02:42 AM
RE: Aging Aubade (edit 1, billy) - by tectak - 08-23-2014, 03:19 AM
RE: Aging Aubade (edit 1, billy) - by ellajam - 08-23-2014, 03:33 AM
RE: Aging Aubade (edit 1, billy) - by Erthona - 08-23-2014, 09:53 AM
RE: Aging Aubade (edit 1, billy) - by billy - 08-23-2014, 04:27 PM
RE: Aging Aubade (edit 1, billy) - by ellajam - 08-23-2014, 08:14 PM



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