08-21-2014, 08:49 AM
I would like to comment from the start that I find this poem really effective, that is, good. Beginning with the double entendre in S1 cat, fix, woman. It sets the tone for the battle/conondrum that may bud between the sexes. And the poem delivers on that front. I find it original, and of course plenty of yummy(though they be terrible too) images.
Nice piece. Looking forward..
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Nice piece. Looking forward..
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