08-21-2014, 08:38 AM
You use the word "confess" four times in this poem. It's not just that the reference of confession would be a waste, the poem's "confession" is the central part of the poem and you appear to have absolutely no reason why you mentioned it. So, you appear to have written a poem about a confession, which you aren't sure why you're making.
Editing right now would be cart before the horse. As the creator of these lines, why don't you try to actually figure out what you're even talking or why you're talking about it before taking things to an editing level?
Editing right now would be cart before the horse. As the creator of these lines, why don't you try to actually figure out what you're even talking or why you're talking about it before taking things to an editing level?