08-21-2014, 08:27 AM
(08-21-2014, 08:14 AM)bwasroy Wrote: I don't understand what you're confessing (or particularly care but that's a different problem) in this poem and as a result I don't know why I'm reading this poem.hmm. I don't care either. but if you don't care, and I don't care, then it seems like it would be a waste to include a confession, right?
I also don't like the use of the word "wend".
I'm not sure how to go about editing the poem so that you will know why you are reading it. why do you read any poem? Maybe I can cram that in there.
Thanks for the comments.

