The Walk

[Truerenigma]

Ok...


I think you are defending this a bit too much. I only had a thot. But lines like "but I will give to him in song " and "nights like this no turn is wrong" and "ill pretend he's walking by my side" are used in a lot of love songs/poems.


The confession isn't that he is gay, but that he has attraction for another person who might not share the same feelings for him.


But, it's your poem.

meh. that's just it. I'm not sure what you think I might be defending. If you think the poem can speak to people dealing with the difficulties of a possibly unrequited love, sounds good to me.