08-21-2014, 04:07 AM
Ok...
I think you are defending this a bit too much. I only had a thot. But lines like "but I will give to him in song " and "nights like this no turn is wrong" and "ill pretend he's walking by my side" are used in a lot of love songs/poems.
The confession isn't that he is gay, but that he has attraction for another person who might not share the same feelings for him.
But, it's your poem.
I think you are defending this a bit too much. I only had a thot. But lines like "but I will give to him in song " and "nights like this no turn is wrong" and "ill pretend he's walking by my side" are used in a lot of love songs/poems.
The confession isn't that he is gay, but that he has attraction for another person who might not share the same feelings for him.
But, it's your poem.