08-20-2014, 09:29 PM
Hi Wjames.
First off, nice subject. Who hasn't been on that awkward first date that made you want to run out screaming. One thing I do not understand is the last stanza with you as the cow and she making the first cut. Is that a good thing? Was she cutting the tension of the moment by speaking or was it a bad thing, did she cut down your confidence with some painful quip? It's kind of ambiguous (not that that is a bad thing) but it leaves me sort of confused as to the attitude of the poem, is it good or bad.
First off, nice subject. Who hasn't been on that awkward first date that made you want to run out screaming. One thing I do not understand is the last stanza with you as the cow and she making the first cut. Is that a good thing? Was she cutting the tension of the moment by speaking or was it a bad thing, did she cut down your confidence with some painful quip? It's kind of ambiguous (not that that is a bad thing) but it leaves me sort of confused as to the attitude of the poem, is it good or bad.
What is the point of living if you don't allow yourself to live?