08-19-2014, 10:35 AM
Hi.
I read this a few times and find myself agreeing with what Bunx said. I think if you break your lines it would flow much smoother and maybe help you see the poem in your head better. I like the theme, very classic. I can picture a single someone sitting in a park daydreaming in the summer sun, wondering where there true love is.
I read this a few times and find myself agreeing with what Bunx said. I think if you break your lines it would flow much smoother and maybe help you see the poem in your head better. I like the theme, very classic. I can picture a single someone sitting in a park daydreaming in the summer sun, wondering where there true love is.
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