A Love Armed

[billy]

a concrete poem in which the bomb works well with the poem. that said you have a lot of undefinables/intangibles that could be better shown than told. it seems to say a lot without saying a lot

The world awaits a war on wars.
A black flag as a declaration while i like the first lines statement i have to ask why
To burn all flags and declarations.
A friendship,
Defending itself.

The world awaits
A language before words
That can find unarmored hearts that finds would work better though i can see why you flesh it out to fit the picture.
In which to thrive; toppling pillars
Of oppression and enslavement.
And fear.

The world awaits a love armed
To create a state of sovereigns.
A weapon of mass liberation;
A bomb that bursts into
Flourishing moments.