08-16-2014, 07:01 AM
I think Section II is significantly stronger than Section I, and almost stands on its own. I'm not sure what you're getting out of Section I at the moment.
"Lights his way to freedom"... mixed thoughts on that, sounds interested but I'm not sure what it means.
"Lights his way to freedom"... mixed thoughts on that, sounds interested but I'm not sure what it means.

