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Life's labyrinth
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08-15-2014, 06:12 AM
I added the line: oxygen drowning and changed the line about the way the walls stretch. Thanks for the feedback billy. I've gotten this far and now I'm sort of stuck in terms of how to take the poem further. Also I removed the line about the walls being my eyes altogether, I felt it wasn't necessary.
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Life's labyrinth - by SomeRandom - 08-14-2014, 06:01 PM
RE: Life's labyrinth - by billy - 08-14-2014, 06:18 PM
RE: Life's labyrinth - by SomeRandom - 08-15-2014, 06:12 AM
RE: Life's labyrinth - by tectak - 08-15-2014, 04:09 PM
RE: Life's labyrinth - by SomeRandom - 08-15-2014, 10:59 PM
RE: Life's labyrinth - by tectak - 08-18-2014, 05:57 AM
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