Aubades (split from Dead Heat)

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I had her at dead from "pink rose petals on your eyes." L5, then the blood-red in L6 confirmed it for me. The held breath went along for the ride, the end was ugh, N was the cause. So, for me, almost a slasher poem.

@fogglethorpe: Thanks for mentioning Aubade, I'd never heard the term and it was an interesting google trip. Does anyone have one they like? I haven't found any I'd read again.

I found an interesting audabe you might enjoy, I know I did.

Audabe with Burning City by Ocean Vuong

http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetryma...oem/247166