08-13-2014, 01:00 AM
leanne, those are some great suggestions. i'll work them into my edit.
fogs, thanks as always for feedback and the keen eye...great catch on the map scenario, i'll fix it.
true, also some great suggestions and observations, for which i am very grateful.
alright all, you've given me some wonderful feedback and i'm feeling much better about this piece. i've got some work to do! shall post an edit soon. thanks everyone.
fogs, thanks as always for feedback and the keen eye...great catch on the map scenario, i'll fix it.
true, also some great suggestions and observations, for which i am very grateful.
alright all, you've given me some wonderful feedback and i'm feeling much better about this piece. i've got some work to do! shall post an edit soon. thanks everyone.

