A Love Armed

A Love Armed

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08-13-2014, 12:48 AM

I like it. Reminiscent of Tolstoyan Christianity, in some ways. One suggestion would be to keep a continuous structure with the opening line of each section.

The world awaits a war on wars.

(The world awaits?) A language before words

The world awaits a love armed

or

The world awaits a war on wars.

A language before words

A love armed .......

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A Love Armed - by metalfan91 - 08-11-2014, 04:47 AM

RE: A Love Armed - by SomeRandom - 08-12-2014, 03:22 AM

RE: A Love Armed - by metalfan91 - 08-12-2014, 11:41 PM

RE: A Love Armed - by alatos - 08-13-2014, 12:48 AM

RE: A Love Armed - by metalfan91 - 08-13-2014, 07:06 AM

RE: A Love Armed - by L Oquence - 08-13-2014, 06:02 AM

RE: A Love Armed - by bwasroy - 08-16-2014, 07:34 AM

RE: A Love Armed - by metalfan91 - 08-24-2014, 04:06 AM

RE: A Love Armed - by KerouacJack - 08-18-2014, 08:43 AM

RE: A Love Armed - by billy - 08-18-2014, 08:24 PM

RE: A Love Armed - by UberWilhelm - 08-19-2014, 10:25 AM

RE: A Love Armed - by Lysander Gray - 10-04-2014, 01:31 PM

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