08-12-2014, 11:00 PM
Nice poem. I think 3rd and 4th verses are rather good. I have trouble viewing May as a submissive month.
Maybe as April's rain continues would flow better - pun intended.
Maybe as April's rain continues would flow better - pun intended.
Before criticising a person try walking a mile in their shoes. Then when you do criticise that person, you are a mile away.... and you have their shoes.

