08-12-2014, 06:26 AM
Thanks guys,
I've been ill, and still am not up to really making a good response to your critique, although I appreaciate all of them.
The one thing I do feel up to commenting on is AJ's comment about
"—an idiot wind that is blowing as the times they are a changing—
every time she opines her mouth"
The idea is she is not very bright, actually just a propaganda spouter with no original thoughts in her head. When she opines her mouth, i.e., she just spouts propaganda, thus she is an idiot wind. All of this, as Billing pointed out has music of the time (Otis Redding, Dock of the Bay) that moves the history along. I will attempt to come back latter when my mind is clearer and follow up on your comments.
Thanks much,
Dale
I've been ill, and still am not up to really making a good response to your critique, although I appreaciate all of them.
The one thing I do feel up to commenting on is AJ's comment about
"—an idiot wind that is blowing as the times they are a changing—
every time she opines her mouth"
The idea is she is not very bright, actually just a propaganda spouter with no original thoughts in her head. When she opines her mouth, i.e., she just spouts propaganda, thus she is an idiot wind. All of this, as Billing pointed out has music of the time (Otis Redding, Dock of the Bay) that moves the history along. I will attempt to come back latter when my mind is clearer and follow up on your comments.
Thanks much,
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.

