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The 7 hour war
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08-11-2014, 07:19 PM
Jake. I love science fiction poetry. Your opening and closing lines are the superior ones. The intervening passages are a bit too technical, visual and visceral. For me this may have been more effective had you stuck to the ethereal flavor of the bookend lines. Thanks for sharing your post-apocalyptic world with us./Chris
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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The 7 hour war - by maximumjake - 08-10-2014, 07:23 PM
RE: The 7 hour war - by ChristopherSea - 08-11-2014, 07:19 PM
RE: The 7 hour war - by maximumjake - 08-12-2014, 02:26 AM
RE: The 7 hour war - by cjchaffin - 08-12-2014, 03:14 AM
RE: The 7 hour war - by maximumjake - 08-12-2014, 03:48 AM
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