[EDIT 3.56] To brighten the flame

[milo]

Thank you for the read, Milo.

I would move it into serious crit if i should, and i guess i have to admit that there are some filler words but i dont think "finding myself walking alone " and "walking alone" have the same meaning.

technically, you are correct. "finding myself is a 'red herring'", but more on that later. As a writer, what is your intent in writing "finding myself"?