08-10-2014, 12:41 PM
Thank you for the read, Milo.
I would move it into serious crit if i should, and i guess i have to admit that there are some filler words but i dont think "finding myself walking alone " and "walking alone" have the same meaning.
I would move it into serious crit if i should, and i guess i have to admit that there are some filler words but i dont think "finding myself walking alone " and "walking alone" have the same meaning.

