A Story: Philly

[milo]

You look at me and you may have some assumptions.

This seems a long and awkward way of wording this.

You think it's accuracy, but it's a demotion.

I think /what/ is accuracy? I think /what/ is a demotion?

I think I am bigger, and I know my flaws,

you think you are bigger than what? These two phrases don't seem good candidates for the conjunctive joining.

Confidence, good judgement, I think I have it all.

so far in the poem, the narrator is making broad assumptions to an unidentified addressee using many abstractions. For the most part, it isn't very interesting or well-written.

Good luck with it.