Photo-Ops
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Thanks for the response guys, I think I was trying too hard to be clever, and it hurt the cohesion of the poem. Sort of like a guitar player going wild with solos and neglecting the melody of a song.
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Photo-Ops - by Wjames - 08-07-2014, 12:11 PM
RE: Photo-Ops - by billy - 08-07-2014, 05:29 PM
RE: Photo-Ops - by bena - 08-08-2014, 02:05 AM
RE: Photo-Ops - by Wjames - 08-09-2014, 03:54 AM



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