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[bena]

Either this is a social commentary about pretending to be what you are not (happy, wealthy, etc.) or a lab rat. Works as both to me, but I can't Mr. Mouse in expensive clothes. Thinking it is the former----but still, might could use some fleshing out about the rat race to clue in the reader. I wish the star in "Of mice and men" had a name.

At any rate, I think if you add a stanza (and I RARELY suggest adding) it might help to convey your message.

Cheers and love

mel.