Ants In the Bed

[billy]

hi crow, it would be much better if you put it somewhere where it doesn't need downloading like youtube, i personally never download anything off here to my pc, it also puts another level in front of the reader who probably doesn't want to spend time downloading and leaving the page they;re on.

the non english lines (jibberish) didn't work at all and in truth i wanted to get through the poem as quick as i could. the first three main stanza were okay but it kinda went downhill from then on.