Smolder
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I revised it a bit thanks to the honest feedback I have received in this thread. Glad you liked it! To be honest, I only found it decent. Nice to know someone else enjoyed it.
"Where there are roses we plant doubt.
Most of the meaning we glean is our own,
and forever not knowing, we ponder."

-Fernando Pessoa
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Smolder - by ajcohen613 - 07-27-2014, 01:09 PM
RE: Smolder - by Willahelm - 07-27-2014, 02:57 PM
RE: Smolder - by ajcohen613 - 07-28-2014, 11:36 AM
RE: Smolder - by Tiger the Lion - 07-28-2014, 12:19 PM
RE: Smolder - by ajcohen613 - 07-29-2014, 05:43 AM
RE: Smolder - by Pink_Bunny - 08-02-2014, 04:25 AM
RE: Smolder - by RSaba - 08-06-2014, 09:34 AM
RE: Smolder - by ajcohen613 - 08-06-2014, 09:43 AM
RE: Smolder - by ajcohen613 - 08-06-2014, 01:01 PM
RE: Smolder - by billy - 08-06-2014, 06:40 PM
RE: Smolder - by ajcohen613 - 08-06-2014, 07:08 PM



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