Fair Deal (True Love in the House edit)

[Tiger the Lion]

Hey ella. I've read this a few times before. Never commented because previous comments seemed comprehensive enough. First off, I love the title. - The edit feels much stronger. I wonder if in the penultimate line you might not need "carpets". It might be implied by vacuums. Something as simple as -"He vacuums and he washes clothes" might add up better for the last line. Not sure - just my impression. An enjoyable commentary. Thanks for sharing. Paul