08-06-2014, 10:55 AM
Nice juxtaposition of the almost archaic "yonder" and the always new "intergalactic". Even better that they couldn't live together in one line. 
The capatalization of "Way" may have taken me a little too close to "Little Miss Muffet" than necessary. I would still have understood if "way" was lowercase. Wonderfully compact. - It works well as a Haiku. Thanks for the read.- Paul
The capatalization of "Way" may have taken me a little too close to "Little Miss Muffet" than necessary. I would still have understood if "way" was lowercase. Wonderfully compact. - It works well as a Haiku. Thanks for the read.- Paul