08-06-2014, 10:47 AM
A bit of an edit up, I'm not convinced L6 needs to go, and I'm never sure if my punctuation is adequate or insane, those squigglies seem like they can go so many ways, but a whisper in my head says there's probably a right and a wrong way to go. Any input is of course appreciated.
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