08-06-2014, 02:31 AM
I like it. The smash rings true for me. I agree with Leanne though, you don't need est. I also suggest losing "of" in the buttons line. It isn't needed, and the rhythm is better without it.
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Lamentations of a Snowman - by crow - 08-05-2014, 01:54 AM
RE: Lamentations of a Snowman - by Leanne - 08-05-2014, 04:33 AM
RE: Lamentations of a Snowman - by trueenigma - 08-06-2014, 02:31 AM
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