08-05-2014, 11:34 AM
Thank you for the detailed response, somerandom.
I agree with what you said about the second stanza, but ever since I read Poe's "flutter flutter you are the utter" line in "infatuation" i really wanted to use flutter(ing) in a poem. Not the best plan or use of the word i suppose. The second stanza needs to be redone.
I agree with what you said about the second stanza, but ever since I read Poe's "flutter flutter you are the utter" line in "infatuation" i really wanted to use flutter(ing) in a poem. Not the best plan or use of the word i suppose. The second stanza needs to be redone.