03-30-2010, 05:04 PM
nice feedback addy, thanks
maybe it needs the last line extending or another one adding.
your right; their is def not needed in L2
and again (i hate you) you're right with the enticed and seduced.
strike three with the dancing. yeah it makes it sound gleefully happy doesn't it
will use all you've said in the edit. thanks a great deal
maybe it needs the last line extending or another one adding.
your right; their is def not needed in L2
and again (i hate you) you're right with the enticed and seduced.
strike three with the dancing. yeah it makes it sound gleefully happy doesn't it
will use all you've said in the edit. thanks a great deal