Barren

[addy]

I'll skip the previous corrections

The fields, once fercund
shoulder their you can take of "their" dusty cloaks of drought.
now they grow hunger .

The loam enticed away
seduced by dancing dust devils I like the idea... could be improved. I think "enticed" and "seduced" is essentially the same idea, so no need to repeat. I'd also recommend changing "dancing", even though it's a nice alliteration, because it sounds distractingly happy. Use a word that conveys movement but more... sinister? ( just imo )

Yellow corn and African violets
dress the last sun-bleached page
of a children’s book. Love these lines. The colors leap out at me.
All that’s left Felt there was something missing in this last line? Dunno

Loved this one, as always. Just needs some spit and polish