08-02-2014, 05:04 PM
Hi Dale ,
my crit was a bit of a mixed message...I had originally thought there was a need to trim some lines, but then even as I was writing this comment and re-reading to make suggestions of what specifically to cut...like you I came to the conclusion that each was needed to balance the whole. (hence the comment --Might as well say it's a keeper).
so basically I am currently no help at all - Sorry being a waste of space.
Will be back to re-read and think some more on specifics.
AJ
my crit was a bit of a mixed message...I had originally thought there was a need to trim some lines, but then even as I was writing this comment and re-reading to make suggestions of what specifically to cut...like you I came to the conclusion that each was needed to balance the whole. (hence the comment --Might as well say it's a keeper).
so basically I am currently no help at all - Sorry being a waste of space.
Will be back to re-read and think some more on specifics.
AJ