Thoughts for the Fourth of July

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Thoughts for the Fourth of July

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08-02-2014, 01:03 AM

The line to secure or security just feels rather awkward to me. Beyond that and the corrections others made I love this.

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Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by Erthona - 07-02-2014, 06:16 AM

RE: Thoughts for the Forth of July - by Brownlie - 07-03-2014, 12:43 PM

RE: Thoughts for the Forth of July - by Tiger the Lion - 07-30-2014, 11:35 AM

RE: Thoughts for the Forth of July - by Erthona - 07-30-2014, 02:43 PM

RE: Thoughts for the Forth of July - by just mercedes - 07-30-2014, 03:02 PM

RE: Thoughts for the Forth of July - by tectak - 07-30-2014, 03:27 PM

RE: Thoughts for the Forth of July - by Erthona - 07-30-2014, 03:36 PM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by billy - 07-30-2014, 05:16 PM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by Erthona - 07-31-2014, 08:44 AM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by maximumjake - 08-01-2014, 01:54 AM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by Erthona - 08-01-2014, 05:30 AM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by maximumjake - 08-01-2014, 05:49 AM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by Erthona - 08-01-2014, 05:59 AM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by rayheinrich - 06-21-2017, 09:35 AM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by dwestmor - 08-02-2014, 01:03 AM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by maximumjake - 08-02-2014, 01:18 AM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by Erthona - 08-02-2014, 01:23 PM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by ellajam - 06-15-2017, 09:47 PM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by nibbed - 06-18-2017, 10:51 AM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 06-19-2017, 09:14 PM

RE: Thoughts for the Fourth of July - by RiverNotch - 06-20-2017, 11:44 AM

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