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So about dreams?

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08-02-2014, 12:45 AM

While I am generally a fan of non rhyming free verse I agree that this feels less like a poem but can't figure out why. But beyond that I DO like quite a few of the lines individually and think with some more tweaking you could have a great poem here.

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So about dreams? - by QDeathstar - 08-01-2014, 09:20 PM

RE: So about dreams? - by ChristopherSea - 08-01-2014, 11:07 PM

RE: So about dreams? - by dwestmor - 08-02-2014, 12:45 AM

RE: So about dreams? - by QDeathstar - 08-02-2014, 02:45 AM

RE: So about dreams? - by trueenigma - 08-07-2014, 12:50 AM

RE: So about dreams? - by QDeathstar - 08-07-2014, 11:11 AM

RE: So about dreams? - by bena - 08-10-2014, 10:30 PM

RE: So about dreams? - by Weeded - 10-07-2015, 10:01 AM

RE: So about dreams? - by RiverNotch - 10-08-2015, 04:53 AM

RE: So about dreams? - by Lizzie - 02-09-2017, 02:54 AM

RE: So about dreams? - by milo - 10-08-2015, 06:05 AM

RE: So about dreams? - by Weeded - 10-08-2015, 07:09 AM

RE: So about dreams? - by milo - 10-08-2015, 07:51 AM

RE: So about dreams? - by newsclippings - 10-21-2015, 10:29 AM

RE: So about dreams? - by billy - 10-21-2015, 12:09 PM

RE: So about dreams? - by rayheinrich - 10-23-2015, 01:24 PM

RE: So about dreams? - by tectak - 10-23-2015, 07:28 PM

RE: So about dreams? - by billy - 10-21-2015, 12:11 PM

RE: So about dreams? - by RiverNotch - 10-22-2015, 09:57 PM

RE: So about dreams? - by newsclippings - 10-21-2015, 12:55 PM

RE: So about dreams? - by tectak - 10-22-2015, 07:51 PM

RE: So about dreams? - by RiverNotch - 10-23-2015, 08:36 PM

RE: So about dreams? - by Wjames - 02-09-2017, 03:36 AM

RE: So about dreams? - by Leanne - 02-09-2017, 04:52 AM

RE: So about dreams? - by abu nuwas - 03-02-2017, 11:03 AM

RE: So about dreams? - by QDeathstar - 02-09-2017, 01:28 PM

RE: So about dreams? - by RiverNotch - 02-09-2017, 09:39 PM

RE: So about dreams? - by ellajam - 03-02-2017, 11:46 AM

RE: So about dreams? - by billy - 03-03-2017, 08:10 AM

RE: So about dreams? - by Leanne - 03-05-2017, 05:28 AM

RE: So about dreams? - by shemthepenman - 03-05-2017, 07:07 AM

RE: So about dreams? - by Leanne - 03-05-2017, 11:02 AM

RE: So about dreams? - by shemthepenman - 03-05-2017, 11:17 AM

RE: So about dreams? - by Dcandy925 - 08-26-2017, 03:16 AM

RE: So about dreams? - by rowens - 08-26-2017, 08:51 AM

RE: So about dreams? - by ellajam - 08-26-2017, 09:15 AM

RE: So about dreams? - by rowens - 08-26-2017, 09:57 AM

RE: So about dreams? - by QDeathstar - 08-26-2017, 12:50 PM

RE: So about dreams? - by Achebe - 08-26-2017, 01:14 PM

RE: So about dreams? - by rowens - 08-26-2017, 02:36 PM

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