08-02-2014, 12:14 AM
(08-01-2014, 11:40 PM)milo Wrote:Is too the double dutch poem, even if it wasn't written then, and as I predicted outdistances mine by miles.(08-01-2014, 11:15 AM)ellajam Wrote: Ha, the double dutch poem. First read, I'll have to think.surprisingly this wasn't /the/ double dutch poem but it would have worked. Now, if only I could go back in time I wouldn't have to write the Chinese Whispers poem . . .
The mixed feet work fine for me except L2 always seems off. The ending is fabulous, glad you posted it.
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