Another Across the Great Divide Moment
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Heeey, baaaaby,

For me it kept a beautiful pace right through. Lotta buttons hit here. I know I have favorite bits and am not sure yet if there's something to cut. I wanna give it a few more reads to see if the same things stick and if anything falls, but a fun, touching and cutting read. That's a lotta years to cover but ain't that the way it is.

Be back soon.
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RE: Another Across the Great Divide Moment - by ellajam - 08-01-2014, 07:01 PM



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