08-01-2014, 03:23 PM
Interestingly enough I'm in the midst of reading the Electric Kool-Aid Acid Test right now. I don't know if this things totally out front man, but it's all your movie.
I like some parts, it's too long for me to give an in-depth crit right now (I'm on vacation using my phone without access to a computer). It's definitely bold, I don't have the balls to write shit half this length. Every moment since the sixties is a whirlwind of across the great divide moments for this cat seems to be what I take away. I'll try and give you a full critique once I'm home.
I like some parts, it's too long for me to give an in-depth crit right now (I'm on vacation using my phone without access to a computer). It's definitely bold, I don't have the balls to write shit half this length. Every moment since the sixties is a whirlwind of across the great divide moments for this cat seems to be what I take away. I'll try and give you a full critique once I'm home.

