fathers

fathers

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Artichoke of Doom

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08-01-2014, 02:31 PM

Hauntingly beautiful, methinks. Need to let it sit inside and revisit. This might be a really good poem. Ah...not that it matters, but let me ponder some more about it.

I'm a fan of you, no doubt.

You can't hate me more than I hate myself. I win.

"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."

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fathers - by milo - 08-01-2014, 11:07 AM

RE: fathers - by ellajam - 08-01-2014, 11:15 AM

RE: fathers - by milo - 08-01-2014, 11:40 PM

RE: fathers - by ellajam - 08-02-2014, 12:14 AM

RE: fathers - by milo - 08-02-2014, 05:15 AM

RE: fathers - by milo - 08-04-2014, 08:33 AM

RE: fathers - by trueenigma - 08-04-2014, 08:40 AM

RE: fathers - by trueenigma - 08-01-2014, 01:02 PM

RE: fathers - by NobodyNothing - 08-01-2014, 02:31 PM

RE: fathers - by maximumjake - 08-02-2014, 01:37 AM

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