A Thin Sparkled Swing

[tectak]

A golden cage I keep
for all rewards that harvests reap. "harvests reap" is correct billy. Colon or comma line end but as you begin the next line wth a conjunction it is of no consequence; so keep the "and" then omit the period.
And a thin sparkled swing for the parakeet. Like billy, I just want to eat this line...it is off the wall and wonderful. Envy. Maybe "...and a thin, sparkled (?...ing?) swing for the parakeet

Its hung beside the chandelier. Covered by billy
(Its really a lamp but its served the years.) Covered by billy

The parakeet I found one day.
I wondered where it were meant to stay. Though awkward english it is moot here

I keep her in a golden cage.
The golden cage won't fly away. Just so damned cute!

We don't talk much, its not my skill.
I'd rather paint or find a hill. Again, leave as is. Forced, yes, but this poem is about a poet not a parakeet and I applaud it...er...you

She does well it appears to me.
She savors crumpets but doesn't like tea.

I live just me with my windows wide
That my love will see me and come to my side. Well, I don't know if this is good or bad but if it IS bad it's good that it's bad

Hypo,
Funky, very funky. Bob Dylan could sing this and claim it as his own...but it's your best yet in my opinion.
Best,
tectak
Dylan put his monkey on a log and ordered him to do the dog. He wagged his tail and shook his head, then he went and did the cat instead. Weird monkey. Very funky.