07-31-2014, 03:29 AM
(07-30-2014, 11:26 PM)billy Wrote: i like the poem and the format though i'm not sure on the [but's]Homage my arse
is the last stanza dylan thomas, i can't think of anything but his poem when light breaks where no sun shines. other than the one nit i fount it to be a simple and decent little homage poem.
wish i could have been more help with my feedback
These bastards used up all the best lines and left me with nothing
Dylan? Yes. Do not go gentle in to that good night.Thanks for the comments, though. Maybe now you can see why "but".
Best,
Tom