07-30-2014, 11:47 PM
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(07-30-2014, 11:40 PM)Spuddo45 Wrote:(06-02-2014, 02:23 PM)vtsai01 Wrote: You don't know it but you do it. You empower yourself with its consumption.
Haziness is often misinterpreted as happiness. The perceptions at moment become deceptions, using your perseverance to find some sort of reverence. You try to fool but your resilience mimics the silence. The substances you use are to hide its inherit menace.
Oh it's so lovely. You can't stop to stare. You depreciate your senses just to appreciate. Crafting that moment as if it's your own installment. You make yourself want to; to want to die. Just so that you can love life.
The poem is a thought provoking but as over readers have commented a little pretentious. Well Done.