Well-Wisher.

Well-Wisher.

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07-30-2014, 11:26 PM (This post was last modified: 07-30-2014, 11:27 PM by billy.)

i like the poem and the format though i'm not sure on the [but's]
is the last stanza dylan thomas, i can't think of anything but his poem when light breaks where no sun shines. other than the one nit i fount it to be a simple and decent little homage poem.
wish i could have been more help with my feedback

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Well-Wisher. - by tectak - 07-30-2014, 09:46 PM

RE: Well-Wisher. - by billy - 07-30-2014, 11:26 PM

RE: Well-Wisher. - by tectak - 07-31-2014, 03:29 AM

RE: Well-Wisher. - by billy - 07-31-2014, 06:20 PM

RE: Well-Wisher. - by cjchaffin - 08-07-2014, 08:08 AM

RE: Well-Wisher. - by QDeathstar - 08-07-2014, 11:29 AM

RE: Well-Wisher. - by tectak - 08-12-2014, 06:56 AM

RE: Well-Wisher. - by trueenigma - 08-12-2014, 07:06 AM

RE: Well-Wisher. - by tectak - 08-12-2014, 05:10 PM

RE: Well-Wisher. - by QDeathstar - 08-14-2014, 03:24 AM

RE: Well-Wisher. - by tectak - 08-14-2014, 04:50 AM

RE: Well-Wisher. - by ray - 08-12-2014, 07:17 PM

RE: Well-Wisher. - by tectak - 08-13-2014, 01:00 AM

RE: Well-Wisher. - by cjchaffin - 08-13-2014, 01:03 AM

RE: Well-Wisher. - by cjchaffin - 08-15-2014, 07:14 AM

RE: Well-Wisher. - by Leanne - 08-15-2014, 08:00 AM

RE: Well-Wisher. - by tectak - 08-15-2014, 03:11 PM

RE: Well-Wisher. - by QDeathstar - 08-15-2014, 08:03 AM

RE: Well-Wisher. - by Random Phoenix - 08-15-2014, 09:21 AM

RE: Well-Wisher. - by Heartafire - 08-28-2014, 02:26 AM

RE: Well-Wisher. - by tectak - 08-28-2014, 03:35 AM

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