07-29-2014, 10:18 AM
Hi Zmeanzy,
I'll preface this by saying that this is my first bit of feedback and I'm a newbie
. Overall, I liked your poem. I do think that the annotations are a bit distracting and, in all honestly, unnecessary. In my opinion, adding them really narrows the focus of what could be relatable to a broad audience.
I'll preface this by saying that this is my first bit of feedback and I'm a newbie
. Overall, I liked your poem. I do think that the annotations are a bit distracting and, in all honestly, unnecessary. In my opinion, adding them really narrows the focus of what could be relatable to a broad audience.