07-29-2014, 07:16 AM
In regards to the hyphen or dash, if you mean for it to be parenthetical without using parenthesize the part should be enclosed by em dashes, such as:
"What he doesn’t tell her
—what she might prefer to keep from herself—
is scribbled on a bar receipt in his back pocket..."
dale the post parenthetical
"What he doesn’t tell her
—what she might prefer to keep from herself—
is scribbled on a bar receipt in his back pocket..."
dale the post parenthetical
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.