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To Get Over You
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07-27-2014, 10:03 AM
I can't really say much but the extended metaphor and imagery truly works well with conveying almost one's quest "to get over you". The penultimate stanza is phrased quite well in my mind. I could really visualise the seas and fish swimming within. But I have to also ditto what bena said. Perhaps a reader could get confused with the amount of metaphors and imagery.
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To Get Over You - by poe - 07-23-2014, 12:23 PM
RE: To Get Over You - by bena - 07-25-2014, 06:11 AM
RE: To Get Over You - by poe - 07-25-2014, 06:21 AM
RE: To Get Over You - by just mercedes - 07-25-2014, 06:39 AM
RE: To Get Over You - by poe - 07-25-2014, 06:43 PM
RE: To Get Over You - by Willahelm - 07-27-2014, 10:03 AM
RE: To Get Over You - by QDeathstar - 07-27-2014, 10:45 PM
RE: To Get Over You - by billy - 07-28-2014, 03:32 AM
RE: To Get Over You - by poe - 07-28-2014, 10:24 PM
RE: To Get Over You - by QDeathstar - 07-29-2014, 12:54 PM
RE: Letting Go of Us (To Get Over You) Rewrite 7-29-14 - by poe - 07-29-2014, 11:05 PM
RE: To Get Over You - by jdvanwijk - 07-30-2014, 11:04 PM
RE: To Get Over You - by Pink_Bunny - 08-02-2014, 04:15 AM
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